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These Are The Things I Need To Know
Will you continue to love me like you said you would?
Will you continue to hold my hand, through the bad times and the good?
Will you hold me close to you each night, as if you can't let go?
Will you always stay by my side and promise not to leave me alone?
These are the things that I need to know.
Because I will always love you, like I said I would.
I will continue to hold your hand, through the bad times and the good.
I will hold you close every night, because I don't want to let you go.
And I will always stay by your side, you know i'll never wander.
With these words I give you me, and my never ending love.
Will you continue to love me like you said you would?
Will you continue to hold my hand, through the bad times and the good?
Will you hold me close to you each night, as if you can't let go?
Will you always stay by my side and promise not to leave me alone?
These are the things that I need to know.
Because I will always love you, like I said I would.
I will continue to hold your hand, through the bad times and the good.
I will hold you close every night, because I don't want to let you go.
And I will always stay by your side, you know i'll never wander.
With these words I give you me, and my never ending love.
I really hate christmas it makes me meloncholy
Hope everyone else is having a good time.
One saving factor, my kids are happy, even though they're sick
Hope everyone else is having a good time.
One saving factor, my kids are happy, even though they're sick
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It is beutiful.
Eventhough it is a theme you see in most poems; you've managed to make it so very beautiful. Gorgeous. And the little rhyming you've put in there really does it good.
"And I will always stay by your side, you know i'll never wander." <- Watch the "I"
But I must say; the secret that does it so nice is the little rhyming I believe.
Eventhough it is a theme you see in most poems; you've managed to make it so very beautiful. Gorgeous. And the little rhyming you've put in there really does it good.
"And I will always stay by your side, you know i'll never wander." <- Watch the "I"
But I must say; the secret that does it so nice is the little rhyming I believe.